Overall, I wholeheartedly approve. Essentially we're just bumping all the ranks up since we'd be a kingdom instead of a duchy.
Who has a stronger claim, the eldest or youngest child of the Queen? The older or younger sibling? Presumably the physically stronger one, right? I can't seem to find any rules on Bloodsport, perhaps in order to codify this in the rules of succession it should be added to the Codex Aurea or this constitution? (I don't mind adding a little rough and tumble to Goldshirian politics, but I just want to know how
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I don't think Lunaris should be separated either. As I understood things, Upper and Lower Lunaris were internal subdivisions of a singular Lunaris, it would be like splitting Suthergold into two counties, East and West.
Also, how are claims to counties going to be recognized? As current Baroness of Ynnraile will I be guaranteed the counties of Holwinn and Syrelwynn?
Will the Count of Ran have influence over Goldshire Hamlet? Perhaps the Queen should make a permanent claim over that particular countship? Or split Goldshire Hamlet off into a "Royal County."