And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
I'm talking about the Empire. I think Toketi is still allowed capital punishment.
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
And it's finished. Again, hope you enjoyed it. Questions, comments, criticism? I'm not at all opposed to going back and changing things if some sections seem a bit off. Just not immediately. I need a break from the writing now.
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
I enjoyed it very much, thank you!
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
Marvellous read! A very well written trial - I always knew our legal system was the most interesting of all micronations
I also hadn't picked the Imperial Pardon being in the folder (though I guess in retrospect it was obvious) - I had assumed it was your resignation if you lost.
I also hadn't picked the Imperial Pardon being in the folder (though I guess in retrospect it was obvious) - I had assumed it was your resignation if you lost.
The character Andreas the Wise is on indefinite leave. But he does deserve a cool war ribbon.
However, this account still manages:
However, this account still manages:
Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
I too was thinking resignation. And I can't help but wonder if the Borrington stuff in the end was put in because I took a liking to the character, but I'm not complaining
Congrats on getting the thing finished at all. I know how easy it is to abandon stories. And I'm certainly glad you didn't - it was a fun courtroom romp.
Have fun plotting your own death!
Congrats on getting the thing finished at all. I know how easy it is to abandon stories. And I'm certainly glad you didn't - it was a fun courtroom romp.
Have fun plotting your own death!
Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
No, I was thinking about the Borrington aftermath even before you started commenting about it.
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
YAY! I can roam the Empire freely again!
Well done Gerk, twas more than I could have hoped for for a resolution.
Well done Gerk, twas more than I could have hoped for for a resolution.
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
Thanks for all your help. Sorry it took so long. Just wanted to do it properly.
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
One day I should read this in its entirety if I find the time, if the reviews are any reflection of its quality
Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
Shouldn't take you that long, it's just under 15,000 words. I'm pretty sure I've seen longer chapters on fanfictions.
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Re: And so it begins (finally)- Comments Nargoth V. Gralus
Yeah, I've written fanfics about that long before (you wouldn't want to read them, trust me ), I'll probably read it sometime this week